Does your book sound like this?

[onyxhawke]

If so, revising may be a good idea.

Thank you Darius.

Comments

[metafrantic.livejournal.com]

"Rockwell Automation Retro Encabulator" should only be said in the voice of Marvin the Martian.

[onyxhawke.livejournal.com]

:-)

I don't know, that guy who used to do all those movie commercials might be able to pull it off. Or Yoda, and Samuel L Jackson, those two can do no wrong.

[metafrantic.livejournal.com]

Yoda?

"Here now, the future is, with the Rockwell Automation Retr- the Rockwell Auto-

"Oh hell. What shit is this, paying me to hawk, you are?"

[metafrantic.livejournal.com]

...uh, of course, that should say "...paying me to hock..."

*headdesk*

Rockwell Automation Retro Encabulator

[bigbananaslug.livejournal.com]

Some of the senior PR people at RA don't know whether to sh*t or fly when somebody pulls this oldie-but-goodie off YouTube and shows it at a conference. I was tempted to when I keynoted the Rockwell Automation Pulp and Paper User Group on Monday, but I chickened out.

Re: Rockwell Automation Retro Encabulator

[onyxhawke.livejournal.com]

Being the SOB that I am, i'd have used it to launch a perfectly sober speech, but then I am a SOB. :-)

[cedunkley.livejournal.com]

That is priceless.