Infodumpitis n ; a condition where the writer spends seemingly vast amounts of words on artless insertation of background information. Often complicated by needless repetition of all or portions of the information in the same body of work.
By now, or within the next couple hours everyone should have received either a critique, or a "hi still reading."
If you haven't, and you've already checked your junk mail folder add mm@onyxhawke.com to your address book and or safe list, and then email me, and tell me what the title was and I'll get you the appropriate response.
A more complete wrap up later. I'm off to read something with cover art. :-)
Mike
If you haven't, and you've already checked your junk mail folder add mm@onyxhawke.com to your address book and or safe list, and then email me, and tell me what the title was and I'll get you the appropriate response.
A more complete wrap up later. I'm off to read something with cover art. :-)
Mike
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