MM Update #1

[onyxhawke]

Right now I'm sitting here with four submissions and three and a half hours behind me. This is interesting. And a great deal of fun.

Comments

[alruff.livejournal.com]

Hey, man! Thanks for the critique! I'll be fixing that stuff (and a lot more), and you'll get another submission soon!

[telynor.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much for taking the time to read my submission.